- Compose a story ( recount ) about an event using full stops,capital letters,commas and speech marks.
- I am going to make sure that my simple story has descriptive detail.
A Moment In Time
As I sit here I see the waves high and crashing into the rocks. In the distance I can see the yellow rising sun reflecting onto the water, kissing the horizon.
I can feel the sharp jagged rocks going into my pants as I sit here. I can feel the sand squishing through my toes as I walk across the sandy rocks. I feel the sea spray going onto my face as I sit on the rocks. I smell the soggy, salty seaweed. This rotten seaweed is getting washed up onto the rocks as the waves come in. I can hear the seaweed popping as the enormous waves go over them.
I can taste the sea spray that has been caked on my face and I can taste the salty water.
I can hear the seagulls flapping their wings as they fly out to the rising sun. “I wish that I could come more often”.
By Xander Shepherd