PB4L ( Postive behaviour for learning)

Friday, 4 September 2015

Narrative!!



All About Bananas!

    On earth lived a lovely lady called Miss Cherry. She had a goal that she wanted to achieve. She wanted to discover the space. And this is how her dream came. She always looks up in the sky every night. One night when she looked out of her window, she suddenly saw a hammock looking planet surrounded by stars. It was yellow all over. It felt like little yellow spots were jumping all over it.

    “To be able to achieve that goal, I need to know saftey things and know about the planet,” she said to herself. She was lucky enough to see a old discovery channel that’s about Planet Banana(the hammock looking planet she saw the other day)! Before that she of course knew nothing about it. But the only creature she knew about bananas are Minions! She’s been doing a lot of studying about the Minions. After 3 months, she was dieing to go to Planet Banana. She decided to wear a bright golden minion suit P.J. and a yellow beanie. She soon took every thing and shoved it into her ‘rocket’ (the rocket is specially made by a scientist for her) and off she went boosting into the air. Soon disappeared in the dark blue sky.

    After 2 weeks in the rocket( she was still studying), she finally arrived. She was so surprised and happy that there are minions everywhere! Suddenly it felt like the time has stopped. The shining bright eyes were glowing with excitement. “Yeah, Ya!” Cried the minions all together. They were so happy that a ‘leader’ (as they would call her) came to Planet Banana. The minions were singing, dancing and even throw Miss Cherry up high in the sky. “No, stop. What’s happening to me!”Miss Cherry was so scared. They did whatever they can do to celebrate.

Planet Banana is a planet full of bananas. The banana on earth are from planet banana. The planet is also known as a “bomb”. Why? Because every year when the planet is “rotten”(it’s because the planet is a huge banana), it will explode into pieces. Which is the snow, hail and rain on earth. But every year’s explosion is on different days. So the minions would have no idea when it’s the explosion. So that is why when you see them every year before the explosion, they will be wearing big, fat puffy airbags around them just in case they will fall.

Exactly 2 weeks after Miss Cherry arrived, the planet will explode. When she saw the “minivision”- the news, she noticed that there will be an explosion(it was discovered by scientists which is good) in 3 days. So she did everything she could help and took out every emergency use things from her bag to use. But it was all not very useful. So she decided to take most of the minions in the her spaceship and bring them on earth in her house. But it may be pretty squashy. I wouldn’t like it very much, would you? It’s going to be really hard to get them all down on earth in three days. So she did something smart! She thought it would’ve been smart to tell the scientists to make more spaceships for faster travelling. And so she did. She taught the minions how to drive a spaceship. The minions learnt so fast with their magic hat that teaches their mind to do something. It was unbelievably fast! So Bob, Stuart, Kevin and Jerry went back to Planet banana and picked up the rest of the minions!

Oh no! 10, 9, 8......It’s going to explode! It’s going to be ruined!! Where is Bob? He came rushing with his mates just in time! Boom! Yay! Everyone was safe at last.

The minions loved earth so they stayed with Miss Cherry for the rest of their lives.

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